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Needs massive improvement

a guy standing there looking at his computer and making advances to it then getting kicked. Well it needs some better storyline besides a kid doing this..... I don't feel pity for this excuse of a flash I know I'm being somewhat cruel but this is just sad.

Good luck in the future

It was short and only contained two characters basically shouting at each other. Graphics, sound, and everything else needs improvement trying making it longer, improving the story. Keep up the practice you might make something worth while, remember flash takes time to create.

Awesome

Graphics need some improvement but besides that this is a great flash. Looking forward to a sequel :D.

Ok.....

Well the conversation was short and somewhat humorous. Being short improved the conversation because if it was too long this would just get monotonous. The graphics need improvement mainly for they're cut-outs. I didn't understand why you chose this background.

Great

Good graphics, great sound effects, loved the ending. It's put together well, I look forward to more of your work.

Made me chuckle a bit

It's short and it's great. In it' simplicity I don't think it can get any better. Looking forward to more of your work.

Short and simple

straight to the point, I didn't laugh but I still caught a small portion of the humor...... very small. Needs to be longer.

I'm a struggling flash artist trying his best to come up with a decent flash and submit it to newgrounds. If I can improve my drawing skills then my flashes will greatly improve until then I'm stuck with crappy flash projects.

Age 34, Male

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