Lord-Of-Lazyness's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flight of the Pigeon]

Well...

Graphics were well drawn but the overall animation was choppy and slow. The pre-loader suffered the same effect. Lack of sound also effects the presentation, a simple screaming meow or hiss could have helped. You have the potential, good luck on your future projects.

Flees responds:

Thanks for the suggestions. I know it is choppy, which is something I can hopefully eliminate next time around. I knew I was going for the silent film thing, but wasn't really sure what I was going to do. I'll plan everything out better next time.

[Flecko's Halloween]

Still amazing

Your artwork hasn't lost any of it's luster, choice of music was very good along with voice acting. The overall plot was humorous, and the animation was superb. I look forward to more of your work.

FleckoGold responds:

Yeah I like ALL those words!

-Flecko-

[=OpentheDoor=]

End of an era, proud new beginning

The animation was decent and the graphical style was all right. I could tell the theme right away, and understood a little more as the song went on. However the voice of the robot confused me, I knew it was a sad piece but there was something about it that just made me laugh, can't explain it. Overall it was a decent flash, that utterly confuses the emotions of the mind if you understand the piece.

Yes I've lost a loved one, and in the will it stated to not be sad on the day of the funeral instead be happy. Thus everyone had a blast at the funeral. Hope you can come to terms with death*personally having 2 near death experiences my self* good luck.

[Silver's failure]

Well..

Graphics were well drawn, and animation was fine but as I've said time and time again a story really helps a flash. I know this is a joke making fun of Silver, which could have been more humorous with an extended version.

I'm not trying to be harsh just truthful. You have some potential here, good luck with you next submission.

[Meeting Snorlax]

Keep at it

Well graphics weren't too bad for your first flash. Clearly no sound but that would be an extra for now but later on it greatly helps. I've gone through plenty of first flash filth*just terrible* and this is a lot better then the average first flash that I've seen. I suggest creating a storyboard or something similar for your next flash to help along with a longer story. Never know when you might make something great down the line, good luck.

[Always look both ways]

Ummm...

Well it wasn't bad for a short flash. Graphics were ok for sticks, the little sound made it somewhat humorous. Though for an initial plot there was no story*since it's a joke*. I prefer a story but that's just me, for a occasional laugh it's all right.

[unfortunate edd 4]

An oddity

Graphics were ok, and animation was decent. A short story with an unlucky ending for ed making me feel as though you need to extend. Maybe have some more interaction with another character before he dies, unexpected death also draws viewers in by making them wonder why he died or leaving them laughing.

[teaser bambino]

Well it started out ok...

I thought the animation was fine until you just suddenly disfigured her and ended it. Graphics are ok, though a lack of story can easily end a flash*it's the harsh truth*. You have the potential to make something good, best of luck on your next animation.

[Metal Gear X Catastrophe]

Well....

The graphics were decent and voice work was ok but the story was a little lacking. You could have something good if you were to add more content, maybe a few thing appear out of no where.

[Awesome Gaiden]

Greatness

Well put together for a short flash. Great voice work and story board. I'm waiting for the DVD to come out :D.