Still amazing
Your artwork hasn't lost any of it's luster, choice of music was very good along with voice acting. The overall plot was humorous, and the animation was superb. I look forward to more of your work.
Still amazing
Your artwork hasn't lost any of it's luster, choice of music was very good along with voice acting. The overall plot was humorous, and the animation was superb. I look forward to more of your work.
End of an era, proud new beginning
The animation was decent and the graphical style was all right. I could tell the theme right away, and understood a little more as the song went on. However the voice of the robot confused me, I knew it was a sad piece but there was something about it that just made me laugh, can't explain it. Overall it was a decent flash, that utterly confuses the emotions of the mind if you understand the piece.
Yes I've lost a loved one, and in the will it stated to not be sad on the day of the funeral instead be happy. Thus everyone had a blast at the funeral. Hope you can come to terms with death*personally having 2 near death experiences my self* good luck.
Well..
Graphics were well drawn, and animation was fine but as I've said time and time again a story really helps a flash. I know this is a joke making fun of Silver, which could have been more humorous with an extended version.
I'm not trying to be harsh just truthful. You have some potential here, good luck with you next submission.
Keep at it
Well graphics weren't too bad for your first flash. Clearly no sound but that would be an extra for now but later on it greatly helps. I've gone through plenty of first flash filth*just terrible* and this is a lot better then the average first flash that I've seen. I suggest creating a storyboard or something similar for your next flash to help along with a longer story. Never know when you might make something great down the line, good luck.
Ummm...
Well it wasn't bad for a short flash. Graphics were ok for sticks, the little sound made it somewhat humorous. Though for an initial plot there was no story*since it's a joke*. I prefer a story but that's just me, for a occasional laugh it's all right.
An oddity
Graphics were ok, and animation was decent. A short story with an unlucky ending for ed making me feel as though you need to extend. Maybe have some more interaction with another character before he dies, unexpected death also draws viewers in by making them wonder why he died or leaving them laughing.
Well it started out ok...
I thought the animation was fine until you just suddenly disfigured her and ended it. Graphics are ok, though a lack of story can easily end a flash*it's the harsh truth*. You have the potential to make something good, best of luck on your next animation.
Well....
The graphics were decent and voice work was ok but the story was a little lacking. You could have something good if you were to add more content, maybe a few thing appear out of no where.
Greatness
Well put together for a short flash. Great voice work and story board. I'm waiting for the DVD to come out :D.
I'm a struggling flash artist trying his best to come up with a decent flash and submit it to newgrounds. If I can improve my drawing skills then my flashes will greatly improve until then I'm stuck with crappy flash projects.
Age 34, Male
Novice Flash Artist
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Joined on 7/15/07