Lord-Of-Lazyness's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Monster Evolution]

Good

Graphics were fine, and the sound was ok, and the menus were organized well. However the game play seems a little lacking, I'll admit I did not mind chomping down endless humans and some times smashing them first. Adding some destructible environment would make things interesting(Example: Military buildings that when destroyed stops production for that building until it is repaired*takes multiple hits*) Possibly adding more enemies(such as bombers, some take more then one hit, etc.)

Overall this was a good monster game, great job.

wilsonbb responds:

Thanks for the suggestions. Bombers make me thinkof suiciding bombers running to the monster :)

[Madness Short 5 - M136]

Good idea

I like the idea of interactivity in a madness flash, however it seems rather slow when you hit continue throughout the flash(Madness is often fast paced action). The rewind time idea was another a good idea(the slower portions fit here). I also suggest lowering the volume of the sound, it is rather loud.

Adding more content(adding several rooms) would create a longer interactive adventure(this one left me wanting more). Good job, just needs a few kinks worked out and it will be great.

(Review Request Club)

Murad136 responds:

Oh, it's good to know you liked it! Yeah, someone else suggested the rooms thing, now I'll be sure to add more rooms! Also it was my first flash with tweening and I got confused with all the layers, that's why it turned out to be so short! Okay, thanks!

[Basic Head Drawing]

Helpful

You went into a good amount of detail on drawing the face, even dividing it into subsections and explaining shading to a small extent. Overall it was a good tutorial for drawing faces.

Flees responds:

Thank you. Hopefully I'll get some other ones out. Might even do one on shading especially, since that gets hideous in flash rather quick.

[Rainbow Peril]

Hmmm.....

Graphics were all right, no sound but it wasn't needed, the game play was ok for an avoider. A slightly faster frame rate on the rainbows would make it more entertaining. A preloader is needed even though it is a small file size, every time I pull it up I am done within one second and have to hit replay. Possibly add a brief instruction section.

Flees responds:

Those are somethings I want to go back through and add sometime.

[Newgrounds Flagging Guide]

Good Tutorial

You explained the basis of flagging very well and clear. This should help clear things up and explain more to those new to the site. The only problem is the menu text and the back button to the menu text doesn't really stand out too well, some may have difficulty reading it.

Little-Rena responds:

I'm hearing a lot about the menu buttons, sorry about those, but I am glad you think this is helpful ;)