For a short flash I like it. Sound quality was good but could have been a little louder. Graphics were average nothing to fancy; enough to capture your point. The animation did lack in a couple places(no real walking just quick action) but you still did speed properly for the most part.
Overall I think you have done very well. Good luck with future animations.
Thanks for a helpful review! I was mainly practicing different shot angles but I do wish I had more animation in it.
Taking a good deal into consideration
For a first animation this is not half-bad although there is not a lot here, you took me by surprise when you reflected the sticks on the ground. The animation was also very smooth and the time frame control was a nice touch. Overall this is good for a first try, I naturally recommend a story and preloader in your next animation.
Good job, you have the potential to make something great I'll keep watch for your next flash(if you decide to do anymore). Good luck.
Thanks for the comment, but I have to tell you this is my first FINISHED stickman combo, I made more before, but didn't submit them because of the high epic-fail factor but I have more work on my old account, FreeRunRobert, search it up on newgrounds.
Since it got hacked and I stopped FreeRunning (rofl) I made this new account.
Not bad for a music video
Having watched and enjoyed various music videos you have done Weebl this one seems to fall short a little. Graphics were good and animation was great. The song itself was all right but rather shorter then I expected and is a little off compared to some of your others such as "Owls"(by a little off I mean the loop does not seem as smooth but still is good). Overall it is composed well for a laugh and enjoyable song. Good work for a something short and entertaining.
I laughed a bit
Graphics were unique and the sound effects were good. Just seeing the character panic was humorous, however the growing arm animation to touch the bird was out of place(you could have him lean a bit and touch him). Even the predictable(but still slightly humorous) "free bird" floor was enjoyable in it's own way. Overall for a short flash this was enjoyable, good luck on future submissions.
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Some good, some spam
Well with various artists, comes various flash. Unfortunately some of the artists in this collab decided it was better to give some people seizures then to actually work on a simple 3 second flash. Cutting some of the spam flash in here would greatly improve it, because for 3 seconds some of them are good. Overall with some editing or removing this collab could be much better. Good attempt with an ok result.
The graphics fits the music(I do not know how to explain but it fits it very well) and the animation is toon like in nature adding some more humor to it. I was not expecting the joke at the end the whole time actually to the end. Overall this was done well for a short flash, good work.
I listented to the song over 1000 times just so I could think of ways to keep things in sync. I know it by heart now...
Not bad for a short joke
Besides the disgusting intro, the rest of it is good. Animation was good, the voice work was well done, and the graphics were great. The short joke in this flash was not half bad. The file size is quite large for a short flash, compressing the audio files and the flash might help. I did not understand the use of the intro besides to disgust the viewer, I would suggest changing it to something that would fit the build up to toad's story.
I decided to split mine into sections due to it's length:
Animation/Graphics: The graphics were decent, and animation was ok. Adding hands to all the characters will improve the layout a bit, feet would be another anatomical feature that is missing(everyone might be wearing dresses). Movement was decent as the characters slid around the room.
Audio/Animation(mouth): Lip syncing is a difficult task and attempting it was a good try, however the mouths fly all over the characters mouth. Try keeping the mouth in one position, changing the size and slight alterations to shape could express words better. Even though this is not my kind of song I will ignore this as the scene corresponds to the song well.
Overall this was not bad for a music video, just needs a little more touching up here and there. Good luck on your next submission.
Okay, I'll take the hands and mouths into account!
Variety of songs
Overall presentation is great. However some of the songs were so low that even with max volume I had trouble hearing them. Clearly a lot of work was put into this collab and it shows.I do not believe "All your base are belong to us" is a song, it seems out of place.
I myself have several unfinished flash projects I have stored away and left in the dust. Overall the organization is very well, except for the lack of a scene selection. Several animations and plots, with various entertainment. Some of the pieces such as the vomiting man were just weird. For the most part I enjoyed the collab. Great work.
Thanks for the review!
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