Age/Gender: 19, Male
Job: Novice Flash Artist
I'm a struggling flash artist trying his best to come up with a decent flash and submit it to newgrounds. If I can improve my drawing skills then my flashes will greatly improve until then I'm stuck with crappy flash projects.
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For a first animation this is not half-bad although there is not a lot here, you took me by surprise when you reflected the sticks on the ground. The animation was also very smooth and the time frame control was a nice touch. Overall this is good for a first try, I naturally recommend a story and preloader in your next animation.
Good job, you have the potential to make something great I'll keep watch for your next flash(if you decide to do anymore). Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, but I have to tell you this is my first FINISHED stickman combo, I made more before, but didn't submit them because of the high epic-fail factor but I have more work on my old account, FreeRunRobert, search it up on newgrounds.
Since it got hacked and I stopped FreeRunning (rofl) I made this new account.
R.
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Having watched and enjoyed various music videos you have done Weebl this one seems to fall short a little. Graphics were good and animation was great. The song itself was all right but rather shorter then I expected and is a little off compared to some of your others such as "Owls"(by a little off I mean the loop does not seem as smooth but still is good). Overall it is composed well for a laugh and enjoyable song. Good work for a something short and entertaining.
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Graphics were good and animation was great, combined with the sound it appeared professional and had an old game feel like I had played for years. Although the story scrolls rather slow, I get the style you were wanting to accomplish. The gameplay itself reminds me of indian outlaw. Over the top shooting, blasting and a unique boss. A variety of boss attacks makes this game truly amazing along with the humorous intro when he introduces himself. After a grueling battle and the crab king defeated, saw clips play giving a little more entertainment to the game. Personally I would like to see a sequel(just to see who the crab king's apprentice is), as usual Wiesi you do not fall short of outstanding. I look forward to more of your work.
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Graphics were fine, and the sound was ok, and the menus were organized well. However the game play seems a little lacking, I'll admit I did not mind chomping down endless humans and some times smashing them first. Adding some destructible environment would make things interesting(Example: Military buildings that when destroyed stops production for that building until it is repaired*takes multiple hits*) Possibly adding more enemies(such as bombers, some take more then one hit, etc.)
Overall this was a good monster game, great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestions. Bombers make me thinkof suiciding bombers running to the monster :)
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Graphics were decent and the sound effects were good. I am confused as to why the preloader proceeded to finish loading and then show the play button repeatedly until it starts on it's own.
What really impressed me is the zoom blurs and other blurs you used to show that he was out of focus due to all the bombs being dropped. The bombs seemed a little off to me, adding a few finer details could make them look better. The explosions were clean and very well done. There is one point that has a little glitch where it repeats for a few secs and finishes, possibly adding bullets and a few audio clips of soldiers shouting would add a more realistic feel to combat. You could go even farther to add individual bullets that fly everywhere.
Not bad for a short flash, with a few improvements it could be great.
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Author's Response:
Oh thanks!
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I like the idea of interactivity in a madness flash, however it seems rather slow when you hit continue throughout the flash(Madness is often fast paced action). The rewind time idea was another a good idea(the slower portions fit here). I also suggest lowering the volume of the sound, it is rather loud.
Adding more content(adding several rooms) would create a longer interactive adventure(this one left me wanting more). Good job, just needs a few kinks worked out and it will be great.
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Author's Response:
Oh, it's good to know you liked it! Yeah, someone else suggested the rooms thing, now I'll be sure to add more rooms! Also it was my first flash with tweening and I got confused with all the layers, that's why it turned out to be so short! Okay, thanks!
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Graphics were unique and the sound effects were good. Just seeing the character panic was humorous, however the growing arm animation to touch the bird was out of place(you could have him lean a bit and touch him). Even the predictable(but still slightly humorous) "free bird" floor was enjoyable in it's own way. Overall for a short flash this was enjoyable, good luck on future submissions.
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Well with various artists, comes various flash. Unfortunately some of the artists in this collab decided it was better to give some people seizures then to actually work on a simple 3 second flash. Cutting some of the spam flash in here would greatly improve it, because for 3 seconds some of them are good. Overall with some editing or removing this collab could be much better. Good attempt with an ok result.
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The graphics fits the music(I do not know how to explain but it fits it very well) and the animation is toon like in nature adding some more humor to it. I was not expecting the joke at the end the whole time actually to the end. Overall this was done well for a short flash, good work.
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I listented to the song over 1000 times just so I could think of ways to keep things in sync. I know it by heart now...
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Besides the disgusting intro, the rest of it is good. Animation was good, the voice work was well done, and the graphics were great. The short joke in this flash was not half bad. The file size is quite large for a short flash, compressing the audio files and the flash might help. I did not understand the use of the intro besides to disgust the viewer, I would suggest changing it to something that would fit the build up to toad's story.
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