For a short flash I like it. Sound quality was good but could have been a little louder. Graphics were average nothing to fancy; enough to capture your point. The animation did lack in a couple places(no real walking just quick action) but you still did speed properly for the most part.
Overall I think you have done very well. Good luck with future animations.
Thanks for a helpful review! I was mainly practicing different shot angles but I do wish I had more animation in it.
Taking a good deal into consideration
For a first animation this is not half-bad although there is not a lot here, you took me by surprise when you reflected the sticks on the ground. The animation was also very smooth and the time frame control was a nice touch. Overall this is good for a first try, I naturally recommend a story and preloader in your next animation.
Good job, you have the potential to make something great I'll keep watch for your next flash(if you decide to do anymore). Good luck.
Thanks for the comment, but I have to tell you this is my first FINISHED stickman combo, I made more before, but didn't submit them because of the high epic-fail factor but I have more work on my old account, FreeRunRobert, search it up on newgrounds.
Since it got hacked and I stopped FreeRunning (rofl) I made this new account.
Not bad for a music video
Having watched and enjoyed various music videos you have done Weebl this one seems to fall short a little. Graphics were good and animation was great. The song itself was all right but rather shorter then I expected and is a little off compared to some of your others such as "Owls"(by a little off I mean the loop does not seem as smooth but still is good). Overall it is composed well for a laugh and enjoyable song. Good work for a something short and entertaining.
Graphics were good and animation was great, combined with the sound it appeared professional and had an old game feel like I had played for years. Although the story scrolls rather slow, I get the style you were wanting to accomplish. The gameplay itself reminds me of indian outlaw. Over the top shooting, blasting and a unique boss. A variety of boss attacks makes this game truly amazing along with the humorous intro when he introduces himself. After a grueling battle and the crab king defeated, saw clips play giving a little more entertainment to the game. Personally I would like to see a sequel(just to see who the crab king's apprentice is), as usual Wiesi you do not fall short of outstanding. I look forward to more of your work.
Graphics were fine, and the sound was ok, and the menus were organized well. However the game play seems a little lacking, I'll admit I did not mind chomping down endless humans and some times smashing them first. Adding some destructible environment would make things interesting(Example: Military buildings that when destroyed stops production for that building until it is repaired*takes multiple hits*) Possibly adding more enemies(such as bombers, some take more then one hit, etc.)
Overall this was a good monster game, great job.
Thanks for the suggestions. Bombers make me thinkof suiciding bombers running to the monster :)
I like the idea of interactivity in a madness flash, however it seems rather slow when you hit continue throughout the flash(Madness is often fast paced action). The rewind time idea was another a good idea(the slower portions fit here). I also suggest lowering the volume of the sound, it is rather loud.
Adding more content(adding several rooms) would create a longer interactive adventure(this one left me wanting more). Good job, just needs a few kinks worked out and it will be great.
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Oh, it's good to know you liked it! Yeah, someone else suggested the rooms thing, now I'll be sure to add more rooms! Also it was my first flash with tweening and I got confused with all the layers, that's why it turned out to be so short! Okay, thanks!
Soothing and joyous at the same time. I cannot honestly find any criticism for this song except for maybe a little more variety but I like it the way it is. I thoroughly enjoyed this song and wish you luck in the future.
Simplicity can sometimes mean perfection
It's rather awe inspiring and effective for something this simple. I can't find anything to critique here or maybe I'm just hypnotized by it.
A beautiful mix of tones and even after listening to it on loop a few times; I still enjoy it.
Congratulations on this currently unknown masterpiece.
Thank you, your kind reviews allways motivate me.
I get a Latin feel from it; made me think I was watching a western movie where something tragic had happened to the hero. Since you know your mistakes I'll leave them out. Even for a demo it's still enjoyable.
As for a name, hmmm.... I'll make a short list(whichever you like or if you don't like any just ignore them lol)
Names: Ballad of the Tumbleweed
A mile to San Antonio
Caravan of Dust
Memories in the Sand
Generosity of a Stranger
First of all, thank you for taking the time to read the description above. As for the name suggestions, most of them sound awesome, and I'm pretty sure I'll use one of those, "A mile to San Antonio" sounds perfect, but I also liked that tragic hero story idea. I'm glad that it inspired you to come up with so many names for it, it means that I'm on the right track with this one. Thanks again for your kind, motivating review, cheers ;)
Shading, coloring and everything else flows together to create this vivid image. I've looked over this image a couple times trying to find some constructive criticism but to be honest; the only one I can find is the fireball. I assume it's coming from the fire bender but it's just in an unusual place.
A rather impressive shell sitting on a chair(I presume). The variety of colors along with strokes add an individual flavor for this piece and while the background make be somewhat generic the shell sticks forth as an image of beauty.
However the outer lining at the back and front are a bit jagged. Other than that this piece stands out as a simple stationary object on a surface. A few minor refinements and it would look even better but currently it is still a good piece of art.
Rather interesting depiction of what I believe is to be jesus(going by the tag). Lighting up the hair correctly and adding a bit of sunshine really adds to this piece. Even the splatter along the image adds the idea that it was a possible speed paint(was it?).
The shorts lack a little color at the bottom while the hands seemed to have gotten a little frayed but the rest looks clean. Overall it's a great piece to be admired and I wish you good luck with your future canvas of choice.
thanks for the review!
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