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Recent Movie Reviews

49 Movie Reviews

Good point

For a short flash I like it. Sound quality was good but could have been a little louder. Graphics were average nothing to fancy; enough to capture your point. The animation did lack in a couple places(no real walking just quick action) but you still did speed properly for the most part.

Overall I think you have done very well. Good luck with future animations.

amodelqueso responds:

Thanks for a helpful review! I was mainly practicing different shot angles but I do wish I had more animation in it.

Taking a good deal into consideration

For a first animation this is not half-bad although there is not a lot here, you took me by surprise when you reflected the sticks on the ground. The animation was also very smooth and the time frame control was a nice touch. Overall this is good for a first try, I naturally recommend a story and preloader in your next animation.

Good job, you have the potential to make something great I'll keep watch for your next flash(if you decide to do anymore). Good luck.

SkatingRobert responds:

Thanks for the comment, but I have to tell you this is my first FINISHED stickman combo, I made more before, but didn't submit them because of the high epic-fail factor but I have more work on my old account, FreeRunRobert, search it up on newgrounds.

Since it got hacked and I stopped FreeRunning (rofl) I made this new account.
R.

Not bad for a music video

Having watched and enjoyed various music videos you have done Weebl this one seems to fall short a little. Graphics were good and animation was great. The song itself was all right but rather shorter then I expected and is a little off compared to some of your others such as "Owls"(by a little off I mean the loop does not seem as smooth but still is good). Overall it is composed well for a laugh and enjoyable song. Good work for a something short and entertaining.

Recent Game Reviews

21 Game Reviews

Mezmorizing

Graphics were good and animation was great, combined with the sound it appeared professional and had an old game feel like I had played for years. Although the story scrolls rather slow, I get the style you were wanting to accomplish. The gameplay itself reminds me of indian outlaw. Over the top shooting, blasting and a unique boss. A variety of boss attacks makes this game truly amazing along with the humorous intro when he introduces himself. After a grueling battle and the crab king defeated, saw clips play giving a little more entertainment to the game. Personally I would like to see a sequel(just to see who the crab king's apprentice is), as usual Wiesi you do not fall short of outstanding. I look forward to more of your work.

Good

Graphics were fine, and the sound was ok, and the menus were organized well. However the game play seems a little lacking, I'll admit I did not mind chomping down endless humans and some times smashing them first. Adding some destructible environment would make things interesting(Example: Military buildings that when destroyed stops production for that building until it is repaired*takes multiple hits*) Possibly adding more enemies(such as bombers, some take more then one hit, etc.)

Overall this was a good monster game, great job.

wilsonbb responds:

Thanks for the suggestions. Bombers make me thinkof suiciding bombers running to the monster :)

Good idea

I like the idea of interactivity in a madness flash, however it seems rather slow when you hit continue throughout the flash(Madness is often fast paced action). The rewind time idea was another a good idea(the slower portions fit here). I also suggest lowering the volume of the sound, it is rather loud.

Adding more content(adding several rooms) would create a longer interactive adventure(this one left me wanting more). Good job, just needs a few kinks worked out and it will be great.

(Review Request Club)

Murad136 responds:

Oh, it's good to know you liked it! Yeah, someone else suggested the rooms thing, now I'll be sure to add more rooms! Also it was my first flash with tweening and I got confused with all the layers, that's why it turned out to be so short! Okay, thanks!

Recent Audio Reviews

27 Audio Reviews

Soothing and joyous at the same time. I cannot honestly find any criticism for this song except for maybe a little more variety but I like it the way it is. I thoroughly enjoyed this song and wish you luck in the future.

Simplicity can sometimes mean perfection

It's rather awe inspiring and effective for something this simple. I can't find anything to critique here or maybe I'm just hypnotized by it.

A beautiful mix of tones and even after listening to it on loop a few times; I still enjoy it.

Congratulations on this currently unknown masterpiece.

Bobox responds:

Thank you, your kind reviews allways motivate me.

Good

I get a Latin feel from it; made me think I was watching a western movie where something tragic had happened to the hero. Since you know your mistakes I'll leave them out. Even for a demo it's still enjoyable.

As for a name, hmmm.... I'll make a short list(whichever you like or if you don't like any just ignore them lol)

Names: Ballad of the Tumbleweed
Gunslinger Woes
A mile to San Antonio
Caravan of Dust
Memories in the Sand
Generosity of a Stranger

Bobox responds:

First of all, thank you for taking the time to read the description above. As for the name suggestions, most of them sound awesome, and I'm pretty sure I'll use one of those, "A mile to San Antonio" sounds perfect, but I also liked that tragic hero story idea. I'm glad that it inspired you to come up with so many names for it, it means that I'm on the right track with this one. Thanks again for your kind, motivating review, cheers ;)

Recent Art Reviews

6 Art Reviews

Shading, coloring and everything else flows together to create this vivid image. I've looked over this image a couple times trying to find some constructive criticism but to be honest; the only one I can find is the fireball. I assume it's coming from the fire bender but it's just in an unusual place.

Wonderful artwork.

Simply outstanding. Not only did you manage proper shading but also managed to hold just enough color(as well as the amount of water) in the right areas to really make this image leap off the page. I can see a lot of hard work in this picture and it is worth admiring.

The only criticism I can think of is the "energy" coming directly off the top of the skull. Being that this is watercolor it is rather difficult to get precise or non-jagged lines. Possibly the little crease in the middle due to another page.

This issues are very minor and overall I think this belongs in a museum or some art gallery; more than just the newground's art portal. I hope you continue to make masterpieces =)

Well it can be a little obvious sometimes with the consistency of markers(obviously seen with the attempt in the background) but it still keeps with the various characters. The mermaids nose could use a little work as the shading tries to make me think that it's a more realistic nose while the shape drawn hints more of a cartoon like one. Based on the shape of the nose it might have been better to avoid shading all together or just faintly(appears too dark to me)

I'm not entirely sure why there is a flower bubble in the scene(or maybe it's a starfish trapped in a bubble?) but it doesn't really seems to fit almost like a random fly on the paper.

Other than the minor critiques above; the remaining features of the picture are drawn rather well and maybe the white octopus's suckers could use a finer stroke to highlight them while some almost seem a little too squarish.

Overall this picture captures the viewer well and is rather impressive considering it was largely done with markers.

iDreamyPillow responds:

Well the background I had a issue with my true blue color, it was dying as i was finishing the background, so i had to go over it with another color to give it more of a full look to it. Understandable, I went for a cartoon-y look, but you are right with the shading idea. Oh, that yellow thing your right about, but I guess it was just kind of a random thing, but you are right.

Thankful this has been helpful. :)

I'm a struggling flash artist trying his best to come up with a decent flash and submit it to newgrounds. If I can improve my drawing skills then my flashes will greatly improve until then I'm stuck with crappy flash projects.

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