Age/Gender: 19, Male
Job: Novice Flash Artist
I'm a struggling flash artist trying his best to come up with a decent flash and submit it to newgrounds. If I can improve my drawing skills then my flashes will greatly improve until then I'm stuck with crappy flash projects.
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Music Reviews: 25
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Latest Flash Reviews
For a first animation this is not half-bad although there is not a lot here, you took me by surprise when you reflected the sticks on the ground. The animation was also very smooth and the time frame control was a nice touch. Overall this is good for a first try, I naturally recommend a story and preloader in your next animation.
Good job, you have the potential to make something great I'll keep watch for your next flash(if you decide to do anymore). Good luck.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, but I have to tell you this is my first FINISHED stickman combo, I made more before, but didn't submit them because of the high epic-fail factor but I have more work on my old account, FreeRunRobert, search it up on newgrounds.
Since it got hacked and I stopped FreeRunning (rofl) I made this new account.
R.
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Having watched and enjoyed various music videos you have done Weebl this one seems to fall short a little. Graphics were good and animation was great. The song itself was all right but rather shorter then I expected and is a little off compared to some of your others such as "Owls"(by a little off I mean the loop does not seem as smooth but still is good). Overall it is composed well for a laugh and enjoyable song. Good work for a something short and entertaining.
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Graphics were good and animation was great, combined with the sound it appeared professional and had an old game feel like I had played for years. Although the story scrolls rather slow, I get the style you were wanting to accomplish. The gameplay itself reminds me of indian outlaw. Over the top shooting, blasting and a unique boss. A variety of boss attacks makes this game truly amazing along with the humorous intro when he introduces himself. After a grueling battle and the crab king defeated, saw clips play giving a little more entertainment to the game. Personally I would like to see a sequel(just to see who the crab king's apprentice is), as usual Wiesi you do not fall short of outstanding. I look forward to more of your work.
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Latest Audio Reviews
An upbeat tempo with various sounds compiled together to create a great fast paced song. Later in the song there is a calmer moment which normally would break off and seem weird, however you managed to keep the over all feel of the song with it(impressed me here). The transitions between each change are well done and keep everything in check. Gives you somewhat of energy buzz as you listen, I could picture this as a track for a racing game. Outstanding work.
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For a large portion of the song it was a loop until you begin to hear the storm brewing near the end. I do not mind the storm near the end, however it seems to drag on as the rain fads away. I would suggest shortening the song by 1.5-2 minutes, to eliminate some of the repetitiveness. Adding more variation would help as well, very few additions or changes are made throughout the song. I understand this is an emotional song, and have to admit the rain effects along with the thunder are well done. Overall it is all right, and with a little tweaking it would be great.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I agree it needs some changes. If I end up putting it into an album I'll have it fade out into the next song to cut off some of the end, along with adding some more variation. For now though, I think it's good enough and I don't want to resubmit a different version.
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Huge 7 minute songs often loses appeal, I suggest cutting it down a couple minutes. For the most part I could get into the song, although it gets a bit repetitive. However at around 5 and half minutes I lost interest(I am not trying to insult you), repetitiveness can ruin any song(I have done this myself).
The ending was a nice touch, however the length of the song is was truly devastates it's appeal. Overall the song is ok, a few tweaks here and there could greatly improve it.
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Author's Response:
Yeah, I feel with practice I should be able to tidy things up and add more variation to my music without cluttering.
Thanks.
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